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Gina Hogan Edwards's avatar

Vivid description! I was right there with Alex, struggling against the rapids. Keep writing!

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Lausanne Davis Carpenter's avatar

Thank you, Gina!

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Diana von Oertzen's avatar

The kelleks look a bit like nightmare stuff, tbh - and I hope Alex makes it out of the river alive 🫣

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Lausanne Davis Carpenter's avatar

For real. And they're still in use. Ancient tech. Thanks for reading!

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